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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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In so many ways I wish I could explain all to you You already know I need you in my life In so many ways I have to live without you But what it really comes down to Is your are my life I am a complex person To understand Most don't understand Nor do they get me But what I am tryin to say Is I have a path in life Choosen for me You said you would help You say a lot But when it comes down to it You know the complex life I live I am simple at heart I don't know if you know That part of me And if I can share it with you -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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mario22 Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23 |
Neala, That poem is something that I can relate to as well, I hope to get down the concept that you have with words. Keep up the super job. Always Mario22 |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I have told the world that I'm an open book, I have no secrets, they have all been opened. A simple life, a simple love, that's all of me. it might be to much to ask in this day and age. not knowing if you can share a love is true, but would you ever want to? You have a poem here that is more than the eye meets. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Joel the Wolf, You said my poem is more than the eye meets. What do u mean by that? -Neala (Goddess of Sadness)  |
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