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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
What does the future hold... For the love we hold so dear Are we being disillusioned Trying to keep eachother near? Eyes shut tight Heart wide open Leading on with might To the uncertain Happiness ever after? Is the question I ask.. Our joy and laughter Is it just a useless task? If only you knew The fear you have brought Feeling all this love... My God, will he break my heart? Must stop the worrying Enjoy the now... Must stop the pondering... But how? |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
There are a lot of emotions behind these words (trust me I know). I feel exactly the same way as you do now and I wish I could tell you how to stop feeling that way, but I haven't found a way yet. If you ever do, maybe you could share your solution with me at [email protected]. I would be really grateful. Powerful feelings shown here. Nice job. ~* Megs *~< !signature--> I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived. -- Margaret Mitchell [This message has been edited by Night Chica (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Fear of the unknown, no. one day at a time, when you loose your love you will look back and say I wish I has done that. Most of us here have no fear of giving our all, We are passionate people, but we open our selves to a tremendous possible pain. Just one day at a time kid. very good poem, food for thought. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Thanks guys for your response.. Unfortunately it's our passionate feelings that get us to write poems such as this one. |
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