navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Peace
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Peace Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Necro Draconis
Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115


0 posted 2000-05-24 07:26 PM


Peace

Look around,
What do you see,
Trash on the ground,
Garbage hanging from a tree,
Is this the way to live,
Couldn’t it be better,
If we could all learn to give,
Then we could live together,
Without all the hate,
Without all the war,
We could choose our own fate,
And live in peace forever more.


Short, sweet, and to the point


 By Necro Draconis

© Copyright 2000 Ryan Kruse - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-05-24 07:29 PM


If only hon!!  But the general populas of mankind still refuses to see the horrors we have created.  Let's hope one day more and more people see these mistakes and band together and really start fixing things!!
Good work  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-05-24 10:23 PM


How true ...
Yes I wish the world would change
and live in peace

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-25 02:00 AM


We can only do our part each day, to make this happen.
I give a go each day.
A great experssion here kid. haha
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-05-25 08:43 AM


As Joel has said, each of us can only do a litle bit each day.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-05-25 08:33 PM


~Right on,...great message. *Peace.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Peace

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary