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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-05-22 10:29 AM



In this place
filled with your empty face
In this dejection
filled with your wretched consumption
In this barren soul
filled with your vommit; perpetual
In this rotting dream
filled with your indigity
  I silently scream.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster


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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-23 09:19 AM


God kid I do this every day for my love.
very heartfelt.
very moving.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-23 10:12 PM


~POW-ER-FUL!!!  Gosh,...nicely done expression. *Peace.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-05-23 11:39 PM


Well written!!    I too feel this way at times, so insignificant in the big scheme of things  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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