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Fearful dream... |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Darkness swirls around and consumes me, and a paralyzing fear holds me. The dream reveals to me my worst fear... I struggle to awake but the dream has complete control. It keeps me suspended in my boiling emotions of: Fear, Hate and Anger. I wake up to find myself crying and as I concentrate the horrifying images flash-back to me. I pray then... I pray that this dream doesn't come true..... |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I've had many dreams come true, it's reality I fear most. But I've had several dreams like this. A great poem, very felt. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
". The dream reveals to me my worst fear..." I loved this line...i hate dreams that bring fear into reality...great expression and emotions...it kinda gave me goosebumps...great job again!! ashley |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Eeekkk,...freaky little number here.  I have had some of my worst nightmares come true in my time,....I've made it through though and continue to each day. *Hang in there. Great piece. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thankfully I don't have too many dreams like this any more. Great work! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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