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Dark Poetry #1

Fearful dream...

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-20 12:35 PM

  Darkness swirls around
and consumes me, and a
paralyzing fear holds me.
  The dream reveals to me
my worst fear...
  I struggle to awake but
the dream has complete
control. It keeps me
suspended in my boiling
emotions of: Fear, Hate and
Anger.
  I wake up to find myself crying
and as I concentrate the horrifying
images flash-back to me.
  I pray then...
  I pray that this dream doesn't
come true.....

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-20 07:03 PM

I've had many dreams come true, it's reality I fear most.
But I've had several dreams like this.
A great poem, very felt.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 2000-05-22 09:21 AM

".
The dream reveals to me
my worst fear..."

I loved this line...i hate dreams that bring fear into reality...great expression and emotions...it kinda gave me goosebumps...great job again!!

ashley

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-05-23 09:04 PM

~Eeekkk,...freaky little number here.

I have had some of my worst nightmares come true in my time,....I've made it through though and continue to each day. *Hang in there. Great piece.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2000-05-24 12:15 PM

Thankfully I don't have too many dreams like this any more. Great work!

Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

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