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Necro Draconis
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since 2000-05-19
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0 posted 2000-05-19 08:29 PM


New Beginning

It is night
There is no wind
There are no stars
The world is motionless and dark
In front of me I hold a candle
Empty and lifeless it is
I light the candle
No longer is it lifeless
The candle dances in the night
Shining light on all that is near
The light engulfs the night air
Bringing all creatures together
Bringing light into this once dark world
Peace and tranquility fill the sky as a new life begins
In my hand I hold not just a candle, but a new life
The life that I hold is mine
The life that I choose is mine alone
The path that I follow, I follow alone
For life is like the candle
By itself it is lifeless and dark
But once enlightened, it brings peace and unity to a once empty world




 By Necro Draconis

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-05-19 08:45 PM


as a lover of candles, I gladly welcome this poem into my darkness

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-20 06:34 PM


This is great, I've made more candles this year than I can count.
A great poem.
I'm looking forward for more.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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