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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
a penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind a man without depression .. is always hard to find some would rather melt a plastic face.. not quite so ugly i know..but it will pass for disgrace as you appear..in the words..in the fear can you admit..under god's swallowing eye.. your the worse thing going... you need to mourn your life away.. already we're bored...of the pretty in you but we must smile..and shake your hand our hidden agenda..is the law of the land "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
i like this one!! i wonder y no one has responded to this one yet?? oh well...they dont know what theyre missing...great job again!!! ashley "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
J, this is really smart work here, depth to it. Great work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Very interesting. a different view. with depth. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"already we're bored...of the pretty in you but we must smile..and shake your hand our hidden agenda..is the law of the land"....Wow, what you've captured here is incredible...nice words,..great expression. *Thanks for sharing. |
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