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Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2000-05-18 09:01 PM

hi yall
well this one is alittle differant for me.  this one isnt mine.  my girlfriend wrote this poem.  she wanted me to post it for her to see what yall think of it.  well here it is.  hope ya like it.

                                                   Dreams

      I lay down tonight
      To hold you tight
      To dream the dreams
      Of peaceful streams
      The dreams of love

      I lay here now
      Never to awake
      Because when i do
      Everythings so blue
      Its a dream
      Expecially of you

       Wanting more than every before
       A love so true
       That only a few
       Have ever seen

      The stars up above
      Shines so bright
      Like a million candle lights
      Of all the loves gone by

     Wishing our lives together
     Where nothing else matters
     Holding each other through eternal life
     Together like husband and wife.

                  To Dream the Dream

Wanda Breeden

Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 2000-05-18 10:51 PM

tell your friend that i like it...and tell her to post some next time she's here, k?

ashley

"Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-05-19 12:46 PM

Jesse, you can tell Wanda this is great, a tinge of saddness amongst the dreams!! Well done

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

3 posted 2000-05-19 12:28 PM

thanks sis.
*hugs* i will tell her. i told her it was great too. i loved it. i will make sure she sees this. see ya sis

Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-05-20 03:36 AM

Jesse, you have a very romantic girlfriend,
keep a hold on her not to tight but with your inner self.
She will see all you give this way.
She has a great ?? wishful wandering heart, and has set goals for her self in life.
And yes she should post more.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

5 posted 2000-05-20 07:41 PM

joel
yes i am gonna hold her. with all my strenth. i love her with all my heart. i would walk threw hell for her just to see her smile. she is the most loving, sweetest person i know. i cant wait to see her agian. thanks joel

Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"

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