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Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-17 05:51 PM

I've finally lost her,
there's no tomorrow for us,
there's only darkness now.
I will forever miss you,
I haven't said good-bye nor
shall I.
I will hold the bitterness
within like always.
I was never able to say I love
you because you've changed.
Good-bye...my love...

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-05-17 06:39 PM

Welcome to passions!! I hope in the future you find the security to say what you feel, it is so important as I think you've learned.

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

2 posted 2000-05-17 06:44 PM

When someone changes sometimes your feelings change too. Good first poem. I look forward to more.

Joy

Bronx
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

3 posted 2000-05-17 08:22 PM

hey-
Welcome! People constantly change...not always for the better unfortunately...
bye
Bronx

Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2000-05-18 03:48 AM

i don't mean to sound cold hearted or cynical, but forgetaboutit. there's only one person who will stick w/ you thru EVERYTHING. you. like i said, forgetaboutit.
i feel you man.

And Welcome. enjoy your stay!

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

5 posted 2000-05-18 06:31 AM

LonelyPoet

Welcome. Great first post. Let your true feelings always shine through, it helps so much.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

6 posted 2000-05-19 03:13 AM

Welcome to the dark side. haha
this is a very dark poem, one that belongs here.
very heartfelt.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

7 posted 2000-05-20 08:25 PM

Thank you all for taking the time to comment.

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