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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-05-18 06:29 PM


Now I remember who you are!!!!!!!

You are no God,
And never will be,
You aren't immortal,
You will never be set free.

You are soulless,
Pretending you have life,
Everything to you,
Is balanced on the tip of a knife.

Poisoning minds,
Killing beauty and spirit,
Hell's bell's toll for you,
Listen and you will hear it.

Suffering cast onto others,
Intolerance to all but that which you want,
I see the lack of spirit and soul,
Your feeble attempts to hound and control.

No mistakes this time,
My blinkers are long gone,
Karma will judge you before God does,
All will be returned to you.

Now I remember who you are...


 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 2000-05-18 10:59 PM


Good job isis as always...i envy u because i can never manage to write that well...please keep postin more cos i want to see what my big sis can think of next!

ashley

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-05-19 12:08 PM


Very powerful Isis. . .

I know what it's like to lose someone like that. . . you forget what and who they are until that one time. . .

Excellent poem my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
3 posted 2000-05-19 12:14 PM


WOW! Very powerful indeed Isis!
Such a strong message here....
I like it, Well said!


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-05-19 12:41 PM


Thanks everyone  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-05-20 03:23 AM


I like the strength in this, it's like shouting, something I don't do, But with an inner fire. haha
great job kid.

Joel.


 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-05-21 08:04 PM


Thanks Joel, I have been known to shout!! LOL
But in this piece it is my soul that shouts these words.. Thanks, glad you liked it  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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