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The river |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
THE RIVER: When at first we met I thought I cannot allow another near It took two weeks working through the hurt Confusing, sometimes times of fear Thought not without extreme faith and love I saw you here and always enough Growing responsibility For you, and you, and you; me If you knew this mind I seek You'd turn, hurt, once retreat Taught, stretched, an elastic band My mind, far beyond capacity Or so it seems. Task in hand Fighting it for liberty I wandered by a river On my way home today And saw the life of flowing Past the present, its own way And me I'm left here And long to have you near You'd be disappointed if you knew the river flows Away from me, away from here, without me The river goes. Sylvia Greybe. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
the river goes...wow! great line...seems like u really portrayed ur feelings in this poem...which is a great way to write poems! great job!! ashley "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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