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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Sleepless screaming pain of loneliness sears every nerve turning day into purgatory night into hell where demons dance a diabolical step while assaulting my mind with disjointed dreams then awakening in a sweat soaked bed to find comfort in the blue glow of a television screen 5/18/00 Gary Pence [This message has been edited by Jonas (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God Kid you just described my nights, Welcome to fright nights. I know this so well. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thanks Joel. "Fright nights"...I like that term  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
My heart skipped a beat reading this hon. So sad for you, those lonely nights when you can't sleep are the worst, me besides the blue screen, have some sad music going too. *hugs* Beautifully expressed At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
This poem is great it describes my world so clearly when Im battling depression |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you Isis and bluebrdy...I've been living like that for years. You'd think I would be used to it by now. lol! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
wow! although i have never experienced terror like this i can imagine what it would be like because u described it perfectly...i hope ur nights get better... ashley "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Man Oh Man! I've had a few of these in my life. I'm lucky it's only a few, but I'll NEVER forget them! Great poem Jonas |
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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
I too understand what its like.. Your poems describes what I'm doing right now.. I try to go to bed.. but I think too much.. Have to many things bothering me. So I watch TV and surf the web till insane hours.. Till I pass out.. So next time you're laying there.. Feeling sad and alone.. We are there.. I am here.. Laying in a bed.. You're not alone in that respect. |
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