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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396


0 posted 2000-05-15 02:18 PM


~A Taste~

A sight of you
blinding and burning
tearing and saturating
scortching up my insides
flushing any purity
destroying,...overcoming me.

A breath of you
choking and spitting
lungs caving and collapsing
smoking up my insides
flushing any purity
destroying,...overcoming me.

A sip of you
twisted and sickening
burning and blistering
tearing up my insides
flushing any purity
destroying,...overcoming me.



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tawny
Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14

1 posted 2000-05-15 07:52 PM


no offence.. but i seem to have some trouble understanding whether this person is someone you love or someone you loathe

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-15 07:58 PM


~No offense taken ,...thanks for the reply.  It is indeed someone I detest.  Thanks for reading.
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-17 02:15 AM


They have no power but what we give them.
They can't hurt us unless we wish it.
The cut is only as deep as we want.
Not destroying, but recognizing our strength.
Remember you only loose if you give up.
A very heartfelt poem kid.
Inner turmoil here.


Joel.


 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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