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Waiting to expire....
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Waiting to expire.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
will you expire ..... with the deepest desire and forget...was never what was meant.. what can i begin to say...never believed in anything.. anyway create a little abstraction..to break the monotony of those unfortunate..to be left.. with the burden known as me "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes I wanted my X to expire also, for so long. And yes it seemed I was an abstraction that broke her monotony. And was told I was a settlement in life. For 20 years. My carnivorous friend, we will hunt together to seek more meaningful hearts in life. I'll howwwwllll for you tonight. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and forget...was never what was meant.. what can i begin to say...never believed in anything.. anyway create a little abstraction..to break the monotony --------------- wow and damn!! this poem just kicks butt jac!! needs to be set to music...it rocks. superb writing. jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful work indeed, seems those named for animals have an insight!!! Great work hon  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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