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isiskate81
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-05-13 01:26 PM


I'm writeing this poem to express my feelings about my dad who left me and my sisters when we were young and he came back and want to act like nothing happend.


Daddy why did you go and leave me alone in the cold world?
What did I do?
Was I bad?
Was I not what you wanted?
Are did you not care?
What could a 4 year old do to make her daddy leave?
Why did you come back now after the wounds have healed?
Do you want to open them again?
Do you want to see me cry?
Don't you know what you did to me?
Every man I ever loved I pushed them away.
I life them before they left me.
Hope can I expect another man to stay with me when the man that was supposed to love me no matter what left.
I don't want you in my life,
I don't want to hurt again,
I don't even want you around my family.
I have tried to forgive you but I can't.  
I don't think I will ever be able to.  
I wanted you to know how i felt this thats all.



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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-13 02:05 PM


~Eeekkk,...these words could have come from my mouth,...I feel for you. This was a great emotional message.  *Hang in there...Peace .
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-14 09:39 PM


So hard for the little girl (you) to deal with Daddy leaving.  Of course children would blame themselves, and then for him to come back in your life and confuse you all over again.  Take it slow and easy with him, always 'see' everything he says and does, but leave a little space for love to grow again, after all, even Dad's make mistakes and this time he may be genuine!! *hugs* to you hon.  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-15 12:38 PM


I just made a post on this subject, you should look at.
this is a great way of looking at a hard subject.
Joe.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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