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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

0 posted 2000-05-12 09:55 AM



          ~~  Beyond  ~~

    Within the tides of the moon
     a siren's haunting melody
     echoes over distant dunes
  beautiful sounds bringing ecstasy
  
  Beyond the sun's shadowed eclipse
     an angel is found in serinity
of passions's lost and souls released
     unharnessed wings seek eternity

                              for SKL
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

   lie light sweet angel lie light
  fear not the darkness of the night
    our eternal love shall everlast
   endearing a promise from the past

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Danny Holloway
May 12, 2000




[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 05-12-2000).]

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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-12 12:13 PM


God Dan, this is a very beautiful poem,
richly haunting, lovingly bold.
In one word "exquisite."
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-05-12 03:33 PM


Oh yes, I have to agree with Joel on this one...exquisite is the word.  

 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-05-12 03:41 PM


Within the tides of the moon
     a siren's haunting melody
     echoes over distant dunes
  beautiful sounds bringing ecstasy
------------------------

lie light sweet angel lie light
  fear not the darkness of the night
    our eternal love shall everlast
   endearing a promise from the past
---------------------

Danny,
this IS INDEED absolutely EXQUSITE...
so cryptic and mystical and
darkly beautiful.
you always seem so inspired by those moonlight shadows. *smile*
superb work here my poetic pal.
IM SO HAPPY to see a new poem from you my sweet BEH  
take care,
BEG/jm



 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-05-12 07:13 PM


Danny beautiful and exquisite indeed, your muse must be a special gal  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-05-13 02:15 PM


~Superb writing here.  Wow,...loved this.
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-05-13 06:53 PM


Danny,
This is wonderful.  Wow...didn't even know you had a dark side!!  Great writing as always...
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
7 posted 2000-05-15 05:07 PM


This is really WONDERFUL!! I love the part about the Siren...so mysterious and ancient so beautiful...i love this...looking forward to seeing more!!

swamp


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
8 posted 2000-05-15 05:22 PM


Very differnet for you Danny.  You have always had versatililty to your writing.  Very nice.

Marina

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