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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~ Beyond ~~ Within the tides of the moon a siren's haunting melody echoes over distant dunes beautiful sounds bringing ecstasy Beyond the sun's shadowed eclipse an angel is found in serinity of passions's lost and souls released unharnessed wings seek eternity for SKL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ lie light sweet angel lie light fear not the darkness of the night our eternal love shall everlast endearing a promise from the past ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Danny Holloway May 12, 2000 [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God Dan, this is a very beautiful poem, richly haunting, lovingly bold. In one word "exquisite." Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oh yes, I have to agree with Joel on this one...exquisite is the word.  "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Within the tides of the moon a siren's haunting melody echoes over distant dunes beautiful sounds bringing ecstasy ------------------------ lie light sweet angel lie light fear not the darkness of the night our eternal love shall everlast endearing a promise from the past --------------------- Danny, this IS INDEED absolutely EXQUSITE... so cryptic and mystical and darkly beautiful. you always seem so inspired by those moonlight shadows. *smile* superb work here my poetic pal. IM SO HAPPY to see a new poem from you my sweet BEH  take care, BEG/jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Danny beautiful and exquisite indeed, your muse must be a special gal At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Superb writing here. Wow,...loved this. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Danny, This is wonderful. Wow...didn't even know you had a dark side!! Great writing as always... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is really WONDERFUL!! I love the part about the Siren...so mysterious and ancient so beautiful...i love this...looking forward to seeing more!! swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very differnet for you Danny. You have always had versatililty to your writing. Very nice. Marina |
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