Dark Poetry #1 |
A Simple Wish To Know |
Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
I feel bitter,i feel cold it's a shame this feeling's old. Twelve days i did wait for you, three more did i implore you & wait & wait i did some more, i strained my ears,i walked the floor. Yet still i hear not your signal, nor your footstep on the shingle. Have you betrayed me??¿ With your love,have you slayed me??¿ I bid you no ill fortune, but please just end this torture. Will you kindly now appear??¿ Or will we never again meet here??¿ The questions,they come & go, the answers truely you should know. Along your path have you been harmed??¿ Or by some other,are you charmed??¿ Do you love me,do you know??¿ Do you hate me,would it show??¿ No evil would i bear you, but with no other would i share you. I simply wish to know. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ another repost from the corner pub. And as usual....i don't really know where this came from. Things just fall into my lap from the sky. Like bird doo doo and poems....LOL And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
I`m with you on this one ,the not knowing is the worst...i enjoyed your words SF,thanks for sharing |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
The not knowing can be a living hell. and this is a great post on just that. thanks kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL I wouldn't put up with it for a second. Me, not like to not know things. great thoughts here --- netswan |
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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
Hey there Swampie!! lol!! Great jobn sweetie!! I always look foreward to seeing anything new from ya, and hey your stuff is great don't let the black dog tell you elsewise K!! The Gypsy The Exprerince of Survial is the key to the gravity of love Enigma Bard Gypsy |
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Evilkat88 Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37 |
I simply wish to know to, and trust me I hate it cuase the person I care for has been hurt truely horrible in the past. And well he is unable to confess the fact of love. He is really hot with me one min. and the next cold as ice. So I wish you all the luck and maybe are somebodies will wise up. Love kat |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Well thank you all so much for your comments =] I agree with you all that not knowing is an evil agony. Although this poem isn't about me,i can kind of relate to it myslef(i should be able to!!afterall i wrote it..lol) but i beleive i just may be done waiting,watching,wondering,and wishing i think i've finally given up o the concept of true love....oh well =] thanks again everyone. swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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