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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-05-11 01:35 PM



~*EVEN IN YOUR EYES*~

I came to you,
knowing of your boundless compassion,
with my heart, lifeless on the floor,
I weeped endless tears
and handed you my broken soul
so that you would repair the shattered dreams
and glue my broken heart back together again,
I revealed to you that which I have never told anyone before,
hoping, begging that you would not judge,
but,
understand,
comfort me,
guide me,
ease my troubled mind
and heal my aching spirit,
but instead all you gave me was silence,
adding to the agony,
and now I am left hopeless
with nothing to life for,
I suppose that I am worthless in Heaven,
as I am on earth,
even in your eyes,
God

By Melissa Honeybee

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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1 posted 2000-05-11 05:06 PM


God does hear us, and does answer each one of us, but we are to filled up with our pain to hear the answer, and when we do we refuse to believe it, not liking the answer.
And you made a mistake in your poem, your NOT worthless here.
Your poem speaks a hidden truth.
Joel


 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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2 posted 2000-05-11 05:23 PM


Melissa, many of us would know all to well the pain of which you speak. The trick is to learn the lessons from the experience and move on....and you my dear are NOT worthless!!

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-05-12 01:54 AM


Melissa~ first, you are NOT worthless. second, God doesn't always give us an answer right away, but He hears everything you say, and He loves you no matter what. Got that, NO MATTER WHAT. Sometimes in order for us to grow, He remains silent, so we can hear ourselves.   -SEA
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