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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I look into the past beyond memories to the long night into your heart I see what i missed What was one here That now is gone How i miss you still How did we change Did we, did you Did I looking back I have lost, We. Do you see me Now all i have become just a bitter soul without a heart Can i hear you breath In the long nights your breathe soft on my exposed neck You took more than i could give more than you should And now im left alone Still I love All you are all you were I cannot forget Your eyes biteing into me Your lips Inviteing me in Will you return To see this broken To see me cry "Can we be all we had" Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~All we had,,....had is the word that stings here. Great expression,...I've wondered these things as well and even though I was burned I longed for more...(strange)...nice post...I liked  |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
No my friend, Spit has it right "HAD" is the word here that counts, it can never be the same, "BUT!!!" it could be better or it could be worse, But never the same. If in the first case fly with it, if in the second use it as a stepping stone. Again this is a great expression my friend. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful poem of regret and longing walter. tender and gentle writing here. I like this fragile side from your poets pen. this is one of my favs by you. take care kind poet, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walter~ this made my eyes sting, trying not to cry....I did anyway..... this is so beautiful, HAD is definately the key word though..... -SEA |
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