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Lonely Shadow
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2000-05-10 08:23 PM


As I sit here
I am dying inside
pain racks my entire being
the pain of a broken heart
I show no signs of heartache
but my eyes tell the tale
of love unwanted, of a heart shattered
All of my sorrow and pain
draining my entire being
all that was once happy and joyous
is scattered like sand in the wind
only the sadness remains
at one time I felt alive
because of the love I felt for her
now, I am a corpse... unloved, unwanted
a lifeless heart beating for no one
now, in my darkest hours
I sit in my grave, my personal hell
and I hope and pray that one day,
my lifeless heart will find someone new

© Copyright 2000 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-05-10 09:15 PM


I hope you do too hon *hugs*

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-10 11:50 PM


Hell kid your just in a grave?? I had frozen mine, and  put it deep within the bowls of a tomb. Locked it a way from every living thing...
And love still found me. And with one kiss the ice had melted, and blood started to pump again.
I have found it, and God knows it was unreachable, So will you.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-05-12 10:14 AM


LS, nice writing.  If this is your real feeling at this time, take heart, time heals all and love strikes at the most unsuspecting times.  

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


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