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BlueEyez666 New Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 9 |
~Hate Me Mom~ did i disappoint you mommy? i never meant to be a failure scream at me again let your hatred cut deep into my soul and shatter me have i forsaken you mommy? i never meant to prove you right plastered your hatred all over my heart alllow me to see nothing else but pure replusion do i anger you mommy? i know i can't be loved spi your cruel words in my misery i have no room for anything else but your fierce deprecates do i depress you mommy? i never meant to be less than perfect drown me in your sea of lies allow me to suffocate in your arms willingly and voluntarily do i disgust you mommy? i didn't know my emotions were forbidden shut me out of your life leave me cold and bitter and watch me suffer you'd like that wouldn't you? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is not a very good testimony of a moms love for mothers day...but it is not your fault that your mothers has problems and doesn't offer you the love you need. I don't think or I hope she doesn't hate you...I think she hates herself and takes it out on you. I can only hope that someone who loves and appreciates you will come into your life so you can have hope. I remember that my parents didn't like me to show or express any emotions. James |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hey Blue, some might think this to be a bad taste for mothers day coming but I don't If this was your mother, you didn't say enough, A mothers love is the most supreme thing in this world, and if it's laid to the side in mistrust, and lies, with the intention to hurt her child, then to hell with her, and the $%^*!% horse she road in on. Anyway, this is a great expression, on your part and I bet hard to. My heart to you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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patricianne Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 66 |
Unfortunately this took me right into my childhood, bitter, sad days. Maybe I'm feeling mopey because its May 10th and snowing like mad! Seriously, these were words that cover alot of my past. Thank goodness, I'm past all that now. Most of the time. Very well done. |
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