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NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-05-08 11:47 PM

Well i took another hit
another mainline shot of you
dizzying spiral body rock
still can`t believe what you do
so perfect is your energy
so raw the drive inside
love it when i`m with you
and carried ,caught astride
the night and the truth
that being with you i`m inspired
my lyrical heart is stirred
flowing uncontrollable
comes a river of thoughts and words
i could pen a sonnet
on how you run your fingers through your hair
knock out a novella
on why i can`t help but stare
single spaced pages filled with emotion
the prose released by my proximity to you

[This message has been edited by NamelessOne (edited 05-08-2000).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-05-09 12:03 PM

Nameless~ oh what a romantic heart you have!! Making me swoon here! This is so beautiful.

-SEA

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-05-09 12:41 PM

Just to be near someone you love is powerful.
As is this poem.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Brian McKeon
Junior Member

since 2000-04-20

Posts 14
Rochester, NY USA

3 posted 2000-05-09 01:20 PM

This is good, I like it. Powerful and quick witted.

patricianne
Member

since 2000-05-04

Posts 66

4 posted 2000-05-09 03:49 PM

I really liked this poem, it made me feel that hit!

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