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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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I made it to another dawn though I was too tired to go on desolate and dark of heart I cry shackles bind me not to fly tightened bands upon this soul lead me further from my goal quench it not with bitter tear let me dwell in deepest fear loose me not and let me free I'll be who you want of me knot upon knot, tighter still bend me, break me to your will one look back, one farewell as I slip slowly into hell |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well let me be the first to welcome you to hell, Angel. Been her quite awhile myself. Don't worry, you never get used to it. You never stop looking back either... kinda strange, I think hell is merely our own creation at times. Michael |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~So much emotion packed into such a little piece,....superb writing here...I like it lots,...but fear the concept you speak of. *hang in there. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I agree with Michael-sometimes we do create our own hell. Maybe once we are able to stop looking back things would be better. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
X Angel, whether self induced or pushed into it, hell is hell on all, visit me in room 667 sometime!!! great work  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Michael...but what if I don't want to stay??? Spitfire...I'm a hanging thanks! KitKat..if only......*sigh* Isis..ty maybe I will join ya! Thanks all |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I've woke many nights like this, thinking God I made a nother one. A lot of power in this poem. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Geesh..I wouldn't expect to see your name here, but I guess you get in this kind of mood too. Painful poem here. I liked it, but wish it wasn't so negative. LOL! I don't know why I'm saying that since I know what forum I came into. I kind of asked for it right? Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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