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Seysi
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 8
kortrijk in belgium

0 posted 2000-05-08 07:12 AM



I dedicate this one to someone I love and hate at the same time...

called suffering

the hatred grows deep in me
your fault probably
you drove me insane with your eyes
I hope your soul slowly dies
i'm the suicidal mistress
the one you use and throw away
but I won't love you less
the love grows deep in me
my heart, your slave
like i suffer i will behave
you don't care you kill me some more
i want you to adore
the hatred lies on my tongue
i'm weak, you're strong
you fool, none of your tears are for me
the one that you let suffer eternally
the love dies deep in me

© Copyright 2000 Seysi - All Rights Reserved
Broken
Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
1 posted 2000-05-08 04:19 PM



This one went straight to my heart. Oh how I know that feeling and confusion. I to have  written a poem about this called "Every day". You could check it out if you like to. Anyway, great piece, it touched me to the core.

Yours truly
~Broken~

 "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token"
~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven"


SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-08 07:20 PM


~Gosh,...this was a potent post.  Great work expressing.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-05-08 08:25 PM


Welcome to Passions, I missed your first post, been away for a few days.  So welcome now.  really liked this piece, I know the feelings exactly you love em yet hate them, but I try really hard not to hate, bad Karma!!    Great work and expression  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-05-09 01:07 AM


It is a whirlwind at times, "love"
very emotional, and heartfelt.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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