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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Standing against the Wind Hearing the it’s echo Feeling The cool chill glide over my face Looking back on the past events, questioning the road I took Questioning my thoughts and reactions Wondering if I was wrong Wishing to solve the eluding puzzle Demanding answers The winds rising with my seething anger Matching my emotions...clouds rolling in Thunder crashing, Lighting striking the ground Rain pouring as the tear runs down my Cheek Looking back, Seeing the pain and hurt Thinking of other ways to deal Asking myself why Hoping to know one day Standing in the Wind No longer angry, but worried Seeing the consequences of those events Watching the maelstrom unleashed by my actions Unable to do anything but hope The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
The winds rising with my seething anger Matching my emotions...clouds rolling in Thunder crashing, Lighting striking the ground Rain pouring as the tear runs down my Cheek ******** You express your emotions very deeply in this piece, and I must say I really liked it. Especially that stanza. Simply great. Take care.  Yours truly ~Broken~ "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before; But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token" ~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ I really felt this....blew me away  -SEA |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~D...gosh this was how do I say this?...grabbing at me in a way..???...anyhow,..it was powerful and I enjoyed it. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Powerful stuff Daniel, all we can do is hope/ Great visuals I saw you there standing, fearing, confused and finally hopeful. Great work!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I had a favorite cliff as a kid, and each time I had a problem in life I'd sit there, with the wind and chill and the salt of the cold ocean blowing down on me. Your poem is all to real to me my friend, a great way of expressing yourself. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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