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No!, wait,...please stay.... |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
No!... Wait, m'Lady...please stay.. What have I said.. or done.. life as I have known it... it is gone... all I have..is you I say yet to me you have gone away.. Please! Please!! yet be it to late? How I know... it's too late.. I had lost my selfdom , yes? in it's wake I sing to shards of pain.. once again I left myself to cry alone.. who am I? I am an unsung song... yet I lap in the wave.. truth be damned.. yet I sing.. Truth be blessed, Who am I? nothing but a hollow sigh.. Edward A. Beerman.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
F_N~ this is wonderful....made me ache...-SEA |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Unsung song?.....your poetry is music to my eyes  This is a powerful post,...emotion bleeding from it's text. Right on. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
FN like Sea said I too ached when I read this, your writing has always moved me my friend, the olde worlde feel to it, the emotions etc. Excellent work. Stay in touch Sir Knight!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
FN....so heartwrenching. Hope it is better for you soon. No one should have to feel this way. Great writing. LW |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
We don't know what we say at times to make or drive away our loves? it is baffling. this is very powerful my friend. and a howwwwllll for the heart. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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