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Dark Poetry #1

Sparkly Blue Toothbrush

nathan
New Member

since 2000-05-07

Posts 6
colorado springs, CO

0 posted 2000-05-07 01:38 AM

SPARKLY BLUE TOOTHBRUSH

Sparkly
Her shimmering eyes smiling
Incidental touches of tingly effervescence
Seltzer for the soul.

Blue
Inner hollowness
Burning color of lonely desolation
Sweet sweet memories spoil.

Every morning, every evening
Whitening, cleaning, reminding
Sterile dry lingering bitterness
O' so torturous. . .
That she left me,
with this
sparkly blue Tooth Brush.

-nathan

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

1 posted 2000-05-07 05:47 PM

Man what a cool little read ...great first post ,nathan look forward to more from you.
hehe i liked it

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-07 05:57 PM

~Right on Nathan....this is a great post.
*Keep 'em coming.

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

3 posted 2000-05-08 12:38 PM

Welcome to Passions.

This is a very good post, Hope to read more real soon

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