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Dream_Cloud Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 10Daytona Beach, FL USA |
You close your eyes and dream In your perfect privacy Why is it that you seem To never dream of me? To you, there's no reality Your life you've made a fantasy But if you'd open your eyes you'd see Your perfect dream is missing me You wish about true love About your perfect mate Sent only from above Certainly destined by fate But what you don't understand Is that I am here right now I long to take your hand And surely tell you how If your eyes are closed Tell me how can you see? It's just how you've supposed but the one you dream of is me |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Great Poem...Oh, how this describes how I feel about someone. |
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Evilkat88 Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37 |
Sometimes we wish we could just slap the people that we truely care for and make them wake up. But we can't force them to see what is so plan to see. Give the person time mybe they will come around but you might get tired of waiting. I can only wish you luck. Much love gos out to you Kat |
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paulsm Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 48 |
BEAUTIFUL- I think we can all relate to that at sometime in our life, you gave me a lum in my throat. Thankyou, Paul Slow Down, stop to smell the roses and stroll through the garden of life, it will be a more pleasurable experience. I think of you always Honey XXXOOO. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sometimes the truth is here not there. We do close our eyes to pray, and the prayer may already be. A very nice poem. Heartfelt. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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