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Eyes ----- yours, mine
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Eyes ----- yours, mine |
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Zunera Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30Pakistan |
I once looked into your eyes, looked deep inside your eyes, to decant my debility, and deface capability, to decipher the mystery and deduce melancholy. I glared Dee a while, then summed up a profile, of truth and true, then, Smiled. I heard the unuttered whisper, I saw the unseen clipper, I smelled the odorless fragrant, I felt the untouched expression, I dived into dried rivers, I showered the waterless bath, I fancied the reality, and sanctured my trellis of thoughts. I wanted to quote your eyes, and ope’ the secrets alive, but the fledge shuddered my circle of expression and I …………… though not able to fathom the magnitude of attraction, the seriousness of thoughts, the firmness of expression, and, the affection, the love. I may not whisper, I may not speak, but I shall answer You , my Love, with my eyes open to dive deep. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Very good my friend, you seem to have a true love like I do. this is great. and this is also a great poem. Thank you. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...great writing here. Deep and thought provoking,....I like. |
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Zunera Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30Pakistan |
Thanx so very much for the lovely replies, 'Joel' and 'SpitFire'. I really do need such encouraging remarks from my Dark Passions friends.  Thanx once again. Take Care, Zunera |
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