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Dark Poetry #1

Eyes ----- yours, mine

Zunera
Junior Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 30
Pakistan

0 posted 2000-05-05 02:01 PM

I once looked into your eyes,
looked deep inside your eyes,
to decant my debility,
and deface capability,
to decipher the mystery
and deduce melancholy.

I glared Dee a while,
then summed up a profile,
of truth and true,
then,
Smiled.

I heard the unuttered whisper,
I saw the unseen clipper,
I smelled the odorless fragrant,
I felt the untouched expression,
I dived into dried rivers,
I showered the waterless bath,
I fancied the reality,
and sanctured my trellis of thoughts.

I wanted to quote your eyes,
and ope’ the secrets alive,
but the fledge shuddered my circle of expression
and I ……………
though not able to fathom
the magnitude of attraction,
the seriousness of thoughts,
the firmness of expression,
and,
the affection, the love.
I may not whisper, I may not speak,
but I shall answer You , my Love,
with my eyes open to dive deep.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-05 02:47 PM

Very good my friend, you seem to have a true love like I do. this is great.
and this is also a great poem.
Thank you.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-06 11:18 AM

~Wow,...great writing here. Deep and thought provoking,....I like.

Zunera
Junior Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 30
Pakistan

3 posted 2000-05-06 03:04 PM

Thanx so very much for the lovely replies, 'Joel' and 'SpitFire'.
I really do need such encouraging remarks from my Dark Passions friends.

Thanx once again.
Take Care,

Zunera

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