Dark Poetry #1 |
Sorry....Goodbye |
Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
How can I to you explain? Whats going on in my heart and mind Surely you see it's plain I must be cruel to be kind The words I said I meant You think there twisted and bent I'm sorry for all your pain And hope you do find love again Confusion, Fear all in my head Perhaps I would be better off dead Cold desolate life Filled with anguish and strife The words you sent missed their mark I'm truly at home alone in the dark For although you think you know me It's I who truly know You you see I might be a witch fat old bore But you came calling me And I'll even the score And why were hear listen to this Fierce like a rattler Yes I do hiss Don't threaten my family or friends I'll tear you to pieces in the end I don't play games intentionally Mixed up, dazed bemused that’s me But if you want to start It’s your life who will depart. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This is chilling and well done Dragoness! It is haunting. Jenny |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Knowing the circumstances behind this piece, sister of my heart, has me agreeing with you and I get first dibs on whatever chewed up remains are left when the pack is finished with him. Verse is very well done. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ditto dream on both counts, and add that I'm glad you're not mad at me! |
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