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Dark Poetry #1

What do you dream?

Larry A. Tilander
Junior Member

since 1999-10-04

Posts 13
Belleville, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-10-07 08:11 PM

Dreams Come True

Be careful what you seek in dreams, They may come real for you
Show caution when you say you wish for things, some may come true
Perhaps I am the answer to your own nightmarish dream
A granting of a half forgotten, plotted evil scheme
Who summoned me? What do you want? Can you contol or I?
Into the mote of your bad dreams there could have flown an I

[This message has been edited by Larry A. Tilander (edited 10-08-1999).]

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

1 posted 1999-10-09 05:27 PM

Nice start. Could led to something more. I'll watch for it.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

2 posted 1999-10-09 09:07 PM

Welcome to thee
Interesting poem it needed a little more though sorry to say
but all in all it was very good

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