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Dark Poetry #1

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X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2000-05-05 11:29 AM

fare thee not upon my shore
leave me here upon death's door
I want not for mortal gifts
e'er to ease, my heart rifts
gently now I lay to rest
fold my hands upon my breast
slumber comes in angry waves
all for you have I gave
cast me into darkest night
ne'er to see sweet morn light
lift me not from my despair
show me not that you care
it matters little that you give
for I struggle e'er to live
lay me down among the blooms
let my soul peruse the gloom
call me not into the day
this my word, my final say

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-05-05 11:38 AM

WOW!!! Now this is what I would call "Dark." Excellent tho and very vivid!

Peace

I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-05-05 02:54 PM

very vivid indeed.
a great "dark" poem.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

3 posted 2000-05-05 06:47 PM

Wow....now this one would make a wonderful epiteth. Have you considered selling this one to a headstone engraver?

Alicat

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-05-06 12:00 PM

Another WOW from me, very powerful stuff.

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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