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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-05-05 10:23 AM



The world ends
Flash Its over
no tears
for its passings

No wound inflicted
to a world
small insignificant
to an end

Hearts stop
instantly
as a core melts
down to nothing

hearts lovers
Beauty in concept
ends in an instant
less than a single blink

No one to mourn
In its final hour
earths ending
no big deal

lonely now
darkness consume
the light is gone
as a sun consumes

Blackness comes
and universe is still
reality nolonger flicks
its theoretical tail

How we fall
in loving eyes
its over now
love has died



  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-05 02:51 PM


Very sad my friend, But I believe in the universe love will survive, if not but between the moon and sun, Earth may pass but love is eternity.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-05-06 12:02 PM


Hearts stop
instantly
as a core melts
down to nothing

hearts lovers
Beauty in concept
ends in an instant
less than a single blink
-------------
lonely now
darkness consume
the light is gone
as a sun consumes

How we fall
in loving eyes
its over now
love has died
---------------

you are so good at writing these stark images
powerful words Walter.
I hope what Joel says is true...
how about you? *smile*
take care dark poet
jm

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