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Dark Poetry #1

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Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

0 posted 2000-05-04 04:52 PM

I'm running but to where
It's foggy and wet
I smell the crisp cool air
The darkness is cold
The mudd and grass between my toes
What's that noise, who are you
Walking closer I start to see, you are just like me
But that can't be
You aresad and unhappy then I notice that you're just a mirror
But you reflect what I feel
kat99

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2000-05-04 06:28 PM

It's sad in a way we sometimes wear those masks to hide how we feel and amaze ourselves when we 'see' our own sadness. Good poem !

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 358
Illinois

2 posted 2000-05-04 11:46 PM

This is a wonderfully well done poem....it's beatiful and sad =] i love it.

swamp

And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-05-05 12:43 PM

Kat,
Powerful words!! This is great writing....I love the mirror concept.....very creative!! Looking forward to more...

LW

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-05-05 01:14 AM

Yesss thisss is a grrrreat Poem.
But I tend to stay away from mirrors, they crack whenever I'm around.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-05-06 05:32 AM

Kat~
Sad and I see where you are coming from. We often do not show what we are really feeling inside do we

HUG
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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