Downward Suction - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #1

Downward Suction

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-05-04 06:23 AM

DOWNWARD SUCTION:

Another feel, a new hope
But turned soon upon its head
Give me freedom to resist
To stand within instead

Once it used to work for me
Shop, visit, read
Now there is nothing to pick me up
Nothing fills the need

One by one my pasions fall
My heart tires of being alive
Floating, now, upside down
From death I can't revive

Pulled down, swept along
Sad, tired, wrong.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-04 09:40 AM

I damn near drowned once I had gone down for the second time, my lungs full of water, an old fisherman pulled me out of the sea, where he came from I'll never know, the tide took me out. Well kid, it's pay back I'll be the old fisherman. Take my hand I'm
not good at CPR but I can ((((hug))).
Joel."

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

2 posted 2000-05-05 03:39 PM

Dear Joel

Thank you so much my friend. I took a gamble with this one, yet it is as I feel. Fighting depression for the second time is in some ways harder than the first.

I really appreciate your warmth and support.

Sylvia

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-05-06 05:27 AM

I say take Joels hand and get yourself outta that darn water

seriously this was sad and i hope things are okay and if you need another hand please take mine as well. A big HUG for when you get outta that water.
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.