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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-05-03 01:22 PM



Wanting you, but not needing the heartache.
Needing you, but not wanting the hurt.
Searching yout soul with all that I am,
Only to find hidden secrets.

Loving you, but not receiving affection.
Hurting me, and you don't even know.
Breaking what is left of my ravaged heart,
There is nothing I can do.

 sKiTtLeS~

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-03 04:12 PM


~Thanks for posting this...sadly I guess I am not alone.  These words could have come from my pen...it's crazy how exact you hit this.  Please take care of yourself
sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
2 posted 2000-05-03 05:01 PM



Awww..you're welcome, SpitFire.  It hurts to have to feel these ways, but it's always nice to have support, huh?  Take care, hun.


 sKiTtLeS~

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-04 02:03 AM


Yes kid, there is something you can do, and you've done it, here.
I'm glad your kicking in again.
a great post, very strong.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2000-05-04 10:25 AM



~Skittles~

  Thanks for sharing this.  Well written and painful to read because I am going through this right now.  It's one of the worst pains in the world to want what you cannot have and to finally realize that you will be forever denied his love.  Excellent piece - your poem spoke volumes for me in only two stanzas!    I wish you the best  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
5 posted 2000-05-04 01:27 PM


Joel: Yes. I know I can always come here, writing to relieve the pain, most often.
I could never leave my Passions family now, so expect more from me to come.  

Melissa: You're very welcome. These feelings are hard, but we'll all experience them. I wish the best for you too.  

 sKiTtLeS~

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