Discuss - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-05-02 09:05 PM

~Discuss~
I thought we could discuss
not strike for understanding
thought we could look
maybe see eachother...
perhaps halfway
never expecting the violence
you spit out
spit in me
my face
my lonely eyes
shattered existance
stuck in your world
thought we could discuss...
for understanding
windows crash with you
music so loud burning it all
hiding in the night
from yourself, your selfishness
hiding me from the neighbors
from your truth
your lies and secrets
plastic cars melt...
when all I needed was a ride
on a dark road
to a safe place.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-03 01:18 AM

My friend you are full of surprises.
this is baffling?
very unique. and interesting.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-05-03 05:10 AM

This it seems is a very dark and intense piece which left me feeling a little scared for you, don't no maybe I read too much into this. Sounds like abuse to me, tell me if I'm wrong, cause I hope I'm wrong.
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-05-03 08:34 AM

~Tracie,...thanks for the concern. I'm not in this situation right now...yeah, at one point I was but I removed myself. I strongly urge anyone else in this position to find a way out...thanks again for the concern. I'm ok

*And Joel,..thanks.... I think...baffling? that's good then....maybe the message shouldn't be so vividly displayed in this case. Thanks for reading as always

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

4 posted 2000-05-03 12:59 PM

Hi s..!
Thats not at all a good thing to happen. I know and feel exactly what has happened and how it should have gone about. But I think it's a late realization. I love her so much and my urge was like in a youthful kid falling in love for the first time, a li'l impatient. But I'm not selfish as it's mentioned and I wanted to share every moment,every surprise life has to offer with that girl I ever dreamt off, but its kinda bizarre situation now, where all I can do is wait,wait to see her,hold her and convey my love to her and discuss what's gonna happen in future. Its a good work.
Sincrely
A_L

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

5 posted 2000-05-04 05:27 PM

Some pretty strong emotion in this poem. Glad its not a bad situation for you now.
~~nice writing~~
Danny

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.