Dark Poetry #1 |
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Washing Her Face |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
Washing Her Face She never liked me to watch her clean her face. She said it was like having someone watch as your soul was stripped to it's bare essentials. First she'd brush her hair, then pull it back, holding it from her face with a plastic band. Then, when she wore them, the eyelashes came off, the mascara, and the makeup, in it's various layers. The lipstick she saved for last, as if it was the final desecration. She'd wash her face then, with the special soap she bought, slowly, gently, as if savoring the pleasure. She never liked me to watch her clean her face, but I secretly spy, every chance I get, through the partially open door. I watch, as chameleon like, she wipes away the day, and becomes the woman I love, and adore. W. James Beard, Jr. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, this was extraordinary. 'tis true the concept many women have of having to be someone else (in appearance) is exactly the opposite of reality, at least for me. Love the line about stripping the soul... powerful words. Very well done poem. Michael |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my gosh...this is great. * I watch, as chameleon like, she wipes away the day, and becomes the woman I love and adore......Awesome,awesome,awesome!!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I'd sneak in to my mothers room as she did her face when I was a kid. She became my mom again. great poem Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
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