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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-05-02 08:06 PM


Washing Her Face


She never liked me to watch her
clean her face.
She said
it was like having someone watch
as your soul was stripped
to it's bare essentials.
First she'd brush her hair,
then pull it back,
holding it from her face with a plastic band.
Then,
when she wore them,
the eyelashes came off,
the mascara,
and the makeup,
in it's various layers.
The lipstick
she saved for last,
as if it was the final desecration.
She'd wash her face then,
with the special soap she bought,
slowly,
gently,
as if savoring the pleasure.
She never liked me to watch her
clean her face,
but I secretly spy,
every chance I get,
through the partially open door.
I watch,
as chameleon like,
she wipes away the day,
and becomes the woman
I love,
and adore.

W. James Beard, Jr.


© Copyright 2000 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 2000-05-02 08:25 PM


Wow, this was extraordinary.  'tis true the concept many women have of having to be someone else (in appearance) is exactly the opposite of reality, at least for me.  Love the line about stripping the soul...  powerful words.  Very well done poem.

Michael

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-02 08:30 PM


~Oh my gosh...this is great.  
     * I watch, as chameleon like, she wipes away the day, and becomes the woman I love and adore......Awesome,awesome,awesome!!!

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-02 08:35 PM


I'd sneak in to my mothers room as she did her face when I was a kid.
She became my mom again.
great poem
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Anvrill
Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
4 posted 2002-07-27 10:45 AM


I have a moment almost like this in one of my stories, actually...

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

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