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paulsm
Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-05-02 08:34 AM


Hello All,

First of all I must apologise for my lack of comment lately, I am a single parent so I get little time on the net these days. Usually just enough time for a post and a quick look before I collapse into bed  .


Hush little girl,
For Daddy is near,
I will always protect you,
From the things that you fear.
~
Forgive me the times,
When I seem far away,
When you bubble and chatter,
‘Bout events of your day.
~
The times I seem distant,
And life rushes by,
Its not I don’t care,
Nor even don’t try.
~
When the morning is over,
And I’m into the day,
The mem’ries flood back,
Of the things that you say.
~
‘Tis then I remember,
The things you have said,
When the sleep and confusion,
Clears away from my head.
~
It’s then I feel sad,
That the moment passed by,
For the loss of that moment,
I just want to cry.
~
Sometimes I forget,
In the rush and the run,
Weary from the effort,
To be a dad and a mum.
~
I know you are healthy,
Kept warm and kept fed,
But you cry for your mum,
Alone in your bed.
~
Life gets so busy,
And time passes by,
But there is no choice,
So we’ll just have to try.
~
I dream of a day,
Of a fam’ly complete,
When the chaos had ended,
Life is ordered and neat.
~
When our hearts are all filled,
And we just don’t mark time,
When we all can forget,
And leave this behind.
~
So hush little girl,
Your Daddy is near,
You share in my dreams,
So walk on without fear.




 Slow Down, stop to smell the roses and stroll through the garden of life, it will be a more pleasurable experience.

I think of you always Honey XXXOOO.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Middleton - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-02 11:46 AM


~I know it's hard but make the moments count..it's all we have.  You seem like a strong and dedicated person...I enjoyed your poem...take care.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-05-02 12:37 PM


this is absolutely beautiful.  i hope your daughter is of the age she can read and comprehend.  if she can, she will never question your love or your efforts to shape her life the best you can.   you get a big    TRIPLE EEE  from me for your effort!!!  good luck, fellow poet.


kynder


  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2000-05-02 04:19 PM


Now this is a gem!  Do show this to your daughter, she is lucky to have a dad like you who is also a talented poet!    Beautiful, heartwarming and sentimental!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

paulsm
Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 48

4 posted 2000-05-05 10:10 PM


Well she's only seven years old at the moment but I hope I can show her this poem one day to let her understand that I understood.

Thank you so much for all your comments.

Paul

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-05-05 11:55 PM


This was a most beautiful piece, you have much to be proud of dad. Your darling little girl, your writing and you heart which seems warm and true.
So hard to be a single parent and I applaud you.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
6 posted 2000-05-06 09:00 PM


Beautiful poem, and so true to life. Daddy's are inportant in a girls life. Especially knowing they are listening and caring.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-05-07 10:05 PM


Very touching and soothing.   James
Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
8 posted 2000-05-08 01:02 AM


Hi paulsm, Absolutely beautiful!!
I'm sorry for your pain. You brought so much life to this poem. Awesome and sad. marcy

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