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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia

0 posted 2000-05-02 07:51 AM


White dove she circles
White dove she hovers

Circles and hovers
Awaits a chance to feel safe

Safe so she can land
Safe so she can settle

Land and settle
So she can feel peace

Peace within her heart
Peace within her soul

Heart and soul
Flying free at last

At last the white dove lands
Finds the peace and harmony she has been searching for

She is home


Dear Joel~
After reading a few of your poems last night this is what followed.
I hope you like it and I wish your dreams become reality
Tracie~
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 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-02-2000).]

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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-02 09:05 AM


Oh Tracie, this is so beautiful, simple like me, I have thought these thoughts so often of her circling, waiting for safety to set in, with all my heart I thank you.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-05-02 09:10 AM


Dearest Joel~
You are most certainly welcome my freind. I had to write this, after reading you poems last night I sat down and this just flowed out of me, so glad you liked it.
Special Hug
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-05-03 11:06 AM


Tracie, this poem shows creativity and style
~~~welcome home~~~~
nice writing...


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2000-05-05 07:10 AM


Dear Danny
Thank-you ever so much for your lovely reply, I wrote this for joel and his white dove. I hope she lands soon  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kurly
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

5 posted 2000-05-05 03:19 PM


Great Poem! Simple yet sweet.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-05-05 11:48 PM


Thanks Kurly for your sweet reply  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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