Dark Poetry #1 |
~White Dove~ |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
White dove she circles < !signature-->White dove she hovers Circles and hovers Awaits a chance to feel safe Safe so she can land Safe so she can settle Land and settle So she can feel peace Peace within her heart Peace within her soul Heart and soul Flying free at last At last the white dove lands Finds the peace and harmony she has been searching for She is home Dear Joel~ After reading a few of your poems last night this is what followed. I hope you like it and I wish your dreams become reality Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Oh Tracie, this is so beautiful, simple like me, I have thought these thoughts so often of her circling, waiting for safety to set in, with all my heart I thank you. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dearest Joel~ You are most certainly welcome my freind. I had to write this, after reading you poems last night I sat down and this just flowed out of me, so glad you liked it. Special Hug Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Tracie, this poem shows creativity and style ~~~welcome home~~~~ nice writing... A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Danny Thank-you ever so much for your lovely reply, I wrote this for joel and his white dove. I hope she lands soon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Great Poem! Simple yet sweet. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks Kurly for your sweet reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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