Dark Poetry #1 |
what is in the dark? |
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
A endless void destroys corrupts impurity raigns all a cleansed in fire see me all over the darkness spreads All we make we destoy all we sow we reap In me my love the seed is set In me my love life death ends begins hold me in darkness Spread me out push me down all is over me Now is where all Now is for all The black hole In you in me its over before it begun Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lots of truth in this one... seems man does destroy all he creates... dark imagery here... but I search for the light... even in the black hole... I can even find it in this poem *smile* later-poet-gator ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
So true, but there is light every where. As J.M. said reach for it. very powerful poem. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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