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ashen Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 13 |
Visage I'm not in the void, I'd be shut up in the glass. I have no choice, I fear reign... Take me down_____... Simple drowning. Let me fall_____... Try this filling. Scented presence, Omnipotent not my style. Singular thought, Wishing carelessly. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hhhmmm,...this poem got me thinking...which is good. Still working on it but wanted to say that your writing is interesting....your style,...like floating thoughts from deep inside....thanks for posting. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Wishing Carelessly, I've done that, and got it. didn't care for it then. Interesting poem. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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