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BlueEyez666 New Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 9 |
~Haunted~ i stare in the mirror only hollow eyes stare back at me faded cries leave my tears to dry the silence overwhelming trembling lips crimson stained finger tips an empty soul a blacken heart haunting whispers tormenting forever lost in a dream memories flowing through my veins words cutting down to sizebleeding from all the lies silence so loud in my ears memories lost in the past no longer sure if they were real or just dreams i thought would lastthe darkness that eld me tight has strangled me nothing left it seems i suppose i should feel free but all i see is this four walls closing in on me |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Blue Eyes: A very sad, hopeless poem, and very well written and expressed, the reader can feel your pain. I relate to every line in this poem and hope that your situation becomes joyful once again for you! Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
This is so painful and full of sadness and hopelessness. I know the feeling, reading each line, and the familiar feeling in my stomach as if it was all coming back...wonderfully written. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Firstly welcome!! I too felt the tremor inside reminding me of pain such as this. So sad and very well written, your pain felt like the reader's own!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes Welcome BlueEyez666 I see the same four walls my friend. I sleep in my living room, just to hear the fish tank buzzing at night, to know I'm not alone. Your expression here is very sad and one we all know to well. great work. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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