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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Troubled Air Still Rages |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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The troubled air still rages, I can stand it no more! My senses are shaken, my soul driven to maddness, I won't take it anymore! When my whirlwind of fury descends on you, You're last uttered word a prayer, Think of all you did, You didn't play fair! Your sin has trapped you, Revealed your true self, You sail rejoicing in your flood of death, No more my woes are put to shelf. Wretched soul come to me, Trust me one last time, Let me have my way with you, Come, this one last time. Beguiling blue eyes, long golden hair, There must be love in there somewhere? Lay down my spirit upon the bed, Rest that ever weary head. I'll seduce you this one last time, The metamorphisis overtakes me, My killing fangs sink into your neck, My revenge, your death, tis only what you did to me. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, it would seem that you want to attack the rage with all of your rage. . . sometimes, we have to do what we have to do. . . for our own survival. . . Wonderful words, my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
great work Isis... the last verse is so aggressive.... well your work and variety always surprises me...  If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW WOW WOW Im awake now !!! Lisa...this is AWESOME!!! this is so powerful and hardhitting. So extrememly well written. You have expressed your emotions here like a force of nature... like a slap of reality. this is one of your best!!!! outstanding work. Look out world Isis is kickin some serious butt!!  very cool poem...take care sweets, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone!! Janet Marie, glad you liked it so much  Avanti, variety is the spice of life A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sinking teeth into flesh now your talking my language. Let me have some, plerrrrase... Damn this snout. haha I like tha aggression, the hate comes out, it's just damn it we can't shed light all the time, then we would be false prophets. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I dislike anger and hate, but hey, sometimes we all have it A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WOW!! This is great....and also a very safe way to vent the anger without any of the physical consequenses!! I've found that it's also more "rewarding" to write these feelings down than it is to take the step to lash out in person...for the results that we hope for are often not what we expect. To wrap this reply up.... ..this was a great piece which I enjoyed and it gave me reason to pause and think.< !signature-->Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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