Dark Poetry #1 |
consumed by you |
kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
And I hope you're thinking of me, as I wander down your street Laughter escapes me, as I think of the time you left 88 gummy bears, leading to the tree where you first kissed me. The only good memory I can force out. The rest, overshadowed by black tears, one for each piece of my soul, consumed by you. The king of contradictions. The master of deception. All of the hanging heads, left in your wake. The life, the magick, consumed by you. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sounds like a deceiver, and a user, anyway that's what you have shone here. This is an interesting poem, You seem to remember the one and only good time that you had, and that's good. all in all this is a good expression. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
Some men can be so cruel. Don't give up. There are some good one's out there! Good poem! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written...keep it up If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Being comsumed by the few good memories is normally what keep us stuck in the situation we are in. Yet "good" memories are nice to keep in a safe little place, untouched by the world. Keep hoping and someday all will get better and that "man" will show up. The man of your "dreams" that is. Peace Dark_kisses I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great poem, sometimes I wish I could force out a good memory..but often times not. Wonderfully Done |
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