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ashen Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 13 |
-Dead End Circles- I've got to move along I've got to groove no more I've got to get into their heads I found myself Riding on a plane The same debate "if I was sane..." Got to stay near you Got stay real close Got to see if I can see your eyes And what about the help And did you call it out And did you try to steal it as it came ashore But things don't come easy Especially when love is lost, And time don't ever stop Except when you want it to, And things just slip away Like they're not supposed to do, I think I've lost all my friends... I'm eating iron pills I've got my vitamins I can't really see what you mean My euphoria Never ever came Now I'm stuck here and stoned We're just kickin' back Starin' at the sky Looking at them dead ends Dead end circles are Pulling me so close I'm surrounding myself like I used to |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Welcome to Dark Passions, Going up the path my friend, is an adventure in decisions, each millisecond we determine what we are going to do, that leads us to the next foot fall. We ether place it down or it falls, both ways we are still on the path, that leads on, no dead ends. This is a cool poem, heartfelt, sad, longing. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
WELCOME! I'm new here myself. Great poem! -Kris |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! Very nice first poem. You write from deep within....very good work. I hope to see more od ur work soon. Peace Dark_kisses I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! Very nice first poem. You write from deep within....very good work. I hope to see more of ur work soon. Peace Dark_kisses I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i really like your rhythym here. and not to mention how very well i relate the whole moving on thing.... traps can be so damn comfy sometimes. *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
wow. welcome. i can't wait to read more. you get a red star!!!  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to Passions! Great Post, looking forward to more The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions and the dark forum. I can too relate to the seemingly dead end of circles, but if you look hard enough eventually you find the way out!! Great first post, keep up the good work  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written i loved it... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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