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This isn't really a poem...more of a vent. (had to...sorry).
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This isn't really a poem...more of a vent. (had to...sorry). |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~Oh my god,..I'm going to throw up why has this happened again why do I give so much of myself when all I get is sick torture laughing in return I'm sick from it all, I ache more than you'll know,...why do I do that why do I give to horrible creatures...how do I find them..and them me sick torture laughing sick torture laughing in my face lips against my cheek hot breath down my neck laughing while I cry while I throw up throw up all you did I can't believe this can't believe that I let you make me feel this way you are sick torture you are sick you have made me sick in the end sick of giving myself sick of receiving from the devil sick of trying so damn hard...you know what?.... I'm just plain sick. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
With a heart that's able to give like this, NO your are not sick, you are more in touch with yourself than most, you live in a world that is sick at best at times, there is some good here, but you must find it, and in the knowing that it is there you will. Just don't loose sight of yourself, and the light within. you can E me any time. I'm an open book to the world. [email protected] http://www.goldrush.com/~joel This is my home page you can see who I am. Joel.< !signature--> I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
I like it, I know where you are coming from, its fine to cut around pretty words and just "throw it up". It hurts to have a heart. Your friend, Ember |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
take care... this is written with a lot of feeling i can tell If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
SICK who isnt this is our world we must change our perceptions of it to improve it if we see this world as something solid and unchangeable we are doomed to be restrained by it and so be sickened by its changelessnes but see it as merely another prison to escape allow yourself freedom of expression and thought all prisons are self imposed. We are minds trapped inside primitive cages our bodies our planet all exist to allow our mind freedom to expand do not see them as prisons. Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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