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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Hazardous subexistance, Bordering on nonexistance, So sick of the pretense, She says in her own defence. These days have seen my spirit die, My life propelled out of control, Tell me how can I retrieve, The life that all this saddness stole. You said you loved my spirit, It is what drew you to me, Did you decide right there to kill it? So I could join you in misery? Such beauty and spirit should be squashed, Crushed into eternity, There is no place for it! God, will you never see? My spirit it's the essence of me, Made of love and fire, Sense, substance and humour, The sparkle that never tires. My spirit, my soul, my self, The best I have to give, Don't want to put it on a shelf, I simply want it to glow and live.. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
me to kid, Glow and live. This starts strong and finishes the same way. I like the strength you seem to be showing in the latest post. good work. Joel. (Dad) hahaha I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Joel *DAD* (hugs)  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, Powerful poem and strong words chosen. If I may say, perhaps the time has come to move on and begin anew?? Probably the only way to retrieve that which has been lost. Sorry to say I relate to your feelings at times in my life. Hope it gets better for you. Didn't mean anything by the comment, just my thoughts on your situation. Hope I did not offend you in any way. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Grow my friend. . . grow and live. . . grow as you are meant to. . . and let nothing stunt that growth. . . Powerful poem Isis. . .let your branches out!! Never stop. . . never wilt. . . never fade. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Isis~ Loved this poem and I can never see you wilting or Fading... I see you as an eternal light~ Love Tracie~  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your spirit is beautiful, loving and caring. It needs to be cradled, nurtured, and cherished. Your words are sad but honest and heartfelt. They reach dry places inside of myself, and others I know. We are body, mind and spirt, and all three cry out for a response to words such as these that merge the three together. they cry out for love. Kathleen |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
isis, all i can say is it takes many battle victories to win the war. and unfortunately, it seems we are destined to be soldiers for life. i, for one, am in the same army!!! so bunk with me!!! hahahaha who loves ya, hun!? me, that's who..... i see your glow over many seas of blue!!!!!! *****kynder |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
Isis, this hits home so hard to me. Once upon a time, I gave everything to a boy who said under his breath "I'm gonna destroy you". And I let him do it over and over, until he handed me the weapons, and I began to do it to myself. And when I finally realized what had happened, everyone had given up on me, and the worst thing was, I had given up on myself. And everyday is an uphill battle, but even when I can barely see through the tears, that light inside is still there. And I forget that far too easily sometimes. But thank you for reminding me that the sparkle is always there, sometimes dim and fading, but never gone completely. Uh, I hope I am making sense. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone!! Like all I have high days and low days... A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Powerful post Isis. As kynder said, we are warriors, fighting an eternal battle, at times we sink to the pits and think we are lost. But, we always bounce up, your soul is perhaps one of the brightest I've seen, we are here to help one another anyway and everway. You've got my addy if you need to talk*S* Daniel |
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