Dark Poetry #1 |
A Prayer for the Dying |
DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
A prayer for the dying, silent and weak. You pray for me now that I cannot speak. You pray for the sorrow left in your heart. You pray for a new life, to make a clean start. You pray for your comfort, the sadness to end. You pray for your coldness, the loss of a friend. You pray to the Gods in the Heaven above. You don't see me soar on the wings of the dove. You pray to expel all the pain from your soul. You pray for something to fill up that hole. You pray for forgiveness, and end to your plight. You pray I didn't give in, give up the fight. You pray that I'm happy and safe in the end. But what you are praying for is the loss of your friend. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~thanks for posting this one...it touched me, and I love that. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
What a touching ending...love the last line! I would have never thought of this...whoever inspired you must be special in your life... "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
Thank you both I am glad to have touched people with my words. I wrote this poem for the people that I have lost in my life and the feelings I have to try to deal with after. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I'm sorry sis but I don't have much time...I just wanted to add in my 2 cents....or however that saying goes. Great poem as usual sis...you have a way with words, you know that? Lotta Love & Stay Strong! Pandora "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
OMG. You seem to know me so well. This hit's to close to home for me, great reading. and a great poem Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark Forum, really liked this and it rang true with me too, death is a sad friend or enemy to us all A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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