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Storm inside... |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Alone in my popularity, distant in my screams, life seemed simple, a kids dream. Sunny day, kites fly high, smell of grass, emerald sky, Scan horizon, clouds of rain, anvil nimbus, foundry of pain. I won't run, I can't hide, Storm I see, rages inside. Thunder groans, lightning hits the spot, nerves electrified, forget it not. Blitzkrieg on life, Knocked me to the wet grass, cold, tired, my hell has passed. Look again, horizon blue, angelic clouds, cotton faces of you. -Rich- (for Serenity  ) |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
My God I Loved this poem. Your words are very touching and full of insight. Wonderful!!! |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
This poem went so fast...it almost has a melody...sweet and sad... "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sounds like you made it...hurray!!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
VerrrrY Gooood my friend. Cotton faces of you. Misty. and good. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WoW.. this was fantastic and I enjoyed it very much.  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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